The first thing I notice was the way the alchemist circles bright blue color contrast to the dark blue background. I love how you did the shape of her body. I love how it looks just like a teenage girl from today. L also like how you made the textures in her clothing stand out more then her hair or skin. I also like how you made the hair seem like it is blowing in the wind like it was alive and not just another drawing of the fan made sequel but a real life person. You have an talent of drawing and you should continue to use it.
I find this picutre very amazing. The color difference between the background and the main objects is very great and brings them out. The shading is wonderful and bends with her. Her hair is full and it not plain,making it look really real. The skin texture is lifelike. The art it's self is wonderful. My bad comments to say is that some parts of her body look adnormal. I seem to find that the face holds barly emotional content. The background might look better if it has as much shading as the rest. I applode you on the hands and the circles are just AWSOME!! Good job.